Comments on: Mind over matter – a flash fiction story

By: Mary

Mary — Wed, 19 Jun 2013 00:22:20 +0000

Terrific doodle, terrific photo and hilarious post.

By: David Stewart

David Stewart — Mon, 17 Jun 2013 09:44:08 +0000

That’s a cruel trick. I’m guessing there was some conflict between them anyway. Nice story and I like your drawing.

By: TheSupercargo

TheSupercargo — Sun, 16 Jun 2013 12:01:36 +0000

In reply to kz. Thank you kz

By: John

John — Sun, 16 Jun 2013 05:50:16 +0000

In reply to Amy.

Amy, One of the fascinating things with Friday Fictioneers is the range of response to the same prompt: some very literal, some – perhaps – clichéd, others jumping off the springboard at all sorts of angles. This week (I hope you won’t mind me saying) yours was one of the more unusual angles. I’m glad you liked the photo.

By: Amy

Amy — Sun, 16 Jun 2013 03:38:24 +0000

John, I enjoyed your photo immensely, although had my trouble with it. It was more of a springboard for me I guess. I really enjoyed your take. The new information about the wife, yes…that might cause a mental ripple!

By: Dawn

Dawn — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 23:10:09 +0000

Awww…that was dirty. Poor Henry.

By: Tony Roberts

Tony Roberts — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 22:31:36 +0000

I loved the photo, and I also like your drawing a lot. Great work.

By: Trudy

Trudy — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 12:49:26 +0000

That’s such a crafty way to remove an obstacle! Very clever. I wonder how he’ll dispose of the wife when he tires of that distraction? I’d be worried if I was her!

By: Sarah Ann Hall

Sarah Ann Hall — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 10:30:02 +0000

Thank you for the great photo. That was not a nice thing to do to Henry. I’d have liked an audience reaction. Oh well, that’s the problem with only 100 words.

By: John

John — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 09:39:29 +0000

Thanks 🙂